The Elements Review: Interwoven Stories of Pain

Twelve-year-old Freya stays with her preoccupied mother in Cornwall when she meets teenage twins. "Nothing better than being aware of a secret," they advise her, "comes from possessing one of your own." In the weeks that follow, they violate her, then bury her alive, a mix of anxiety and frustration flitting across their faces as they finally free her from her improvised coffin.

This might have stood as the disturbing centrepiece of a novel, but it's just one of many awful events in The Elements, which gathers four novelettes – published distinctly between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters negotiate historical pain and try to discover peace in the contemporary moment.

Debated Context and Thematic Exploration

The book's publication has been overshadowed by the addition of Earth, the second novella, on the preliminary list for a notable LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, the majority other nominees withdrew in dissent at the author's debated views – and this year's prize has now been called off.

Conversation of LGBTQ+ matters is not present from The Elements, although the author addresses plenty of major issues. LGBTQ+ discrimination, the impact of conventional and digital platforms, family disregard and sexual violence are all explored.

Multiple Narratives of Suffering

  • In Water, a mourning woman named Willow transfers to a remote Irish island after her husband is imprisoned for horrific crimes.
  • In Earth, Evan is a soccer player on legal proceedings as an accessory to rape.
  • In Fire, the mature Freya juggles retaliation with her work as a surgeon.
  • In Air, a parent flies to a burial with his teenage son, and considers how much to divulge about his family's history.
Trauma is accumulated upon pain as wounded survivors seem doomed to bump into each other repeatedly for all time

Interconnected Narratives

Relationships abound. We initially encounter Evan as a boy trying to flee the island of Water. His trial's jury contains the Freya who returns in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, works with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Minor characters from one narrative resurface in cottages, pubs or legal settings in another.

These narrative elements may sound tangled, but the author knows how to power a narrative – his prior acclaimed Holocaust drama has sold millions, and he has been rendered into many languages. His businesslike prose sparkles with suspenseful hooks: "in the end, a doctor in the burns unit should be wiser than to toy with fire"; "the first thing I do when I come to the island is change my name".

Personality Portrayal and Storytelling Strength

Characters are drawn in brief, effective lines: the caring Nigerian priest, the troubled pub landlord, the daughter at conflict with her mother. Some scenes echo with melancholy power or insightful humour: a boy is punched by his father after wetting himself at a football match; a biased island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour exchange jabs over cups of weak tea.

The author's talent of bringing you wholeheartedly into each narrative gives the comeback of a character or plot strand from an prior story a real frisson, for the opening times at least. Yet the cumulative effect of it all is dulling, and at times nearly comic: trauma is layered with pain, chance on accident in a grim farce in which wounded survivors seem destined to bump into each other continuously for eternity.

Thematic Depth and Concluding Evaluation

If this sounds not exactly life and more like uncertainty, that is part of the author's thesis. These hurt people are burdened by the crimes they have experienced, caught in routines of thought and behavior that agitate and plunge and may in turn harm others. The author has discussed about the impact of his individual experiences of harm and he describes with understanding the way his ensemble negotiate this dangerous landscape, extending for treatments – seclusion, icy sea dips, forgiveness or bracing honesty – that might provide clarity.

The book's "fundamental" framing isn't terribly informative, while the rapid pace means the discussion of gender dynamics or digital platforms is mostly surface-level. But while The Elements is a imperfect work, it's also a thoroughly engaging, survivor-centered chronicle: a appreciated riposte to the common preoccupation on authorities and perpetrators. The author shows how suffering can permeate lives and generations, and how time and compassion can soften its reverberations.

Nicole Cooper
Nicole Cooper

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